Sunday, August 12, 2007

Monday Poetry Train #12

This poem seldom sees the light of day. I've never even printed a hard copy of it. I wrote it a few years ago while in a funk, in an attempt to remind myself that the foul mood I was in would pass as surely as the sun moves south in summer.

You all are welcome to snort. I do whenever I read this over when my mood is on the upswing. I avoid reading it when I'm down as then I hear the lines intoned as though by a parody of a maudlin King Lear. But when I'm up, I hear the King's jester chanting them in a sniggering cackle. Either way, I cringe.

At the moment, I'm hearing both their voices in a weird duet as the king hunches over the parchment saying each word as he scratches it down while his jester bounces upon his shoulders repeating them with caustic glee. As the king I would like to tattoo the words on the jester's own skin. As the jester I would like to blow smoke in the king's ear and watch it come out his nose in the shapes of the words. Or better yet, the shapes of the things the words signify. Looms, louts, harpies, tombs, snouts, song-birds, moons, mouths, hearts...

=====The Womb Of My Mouth

The womb of my mouth is gravid with doom.
The loom of my fate does shuttle sans boon.
Can life breathe for long beneath such sad ruin?
Will my heart soon succumb to the lure of the tomb?
How long will the harpies their dire rant employ?
May the rabid louts with their baneful tunes rout.
May they take their long snouts way off to the south.
And howl their foul taunts to the stony-faced moon.
Then, (maybe soon?) I’ll hear once more the fair croon
As song-birds at dawn sing out: "Bright day Ahoy!"
So my heart, cleansed of doubt, will look all about
And see in the light only beauty and truth.
Then glad hymns of hope will be born of my mouth.
And my soul, exulting in the shadow-less noon,
Will sing for a future effulgent with Joy.

13 tell me a story:

Rhian 8/13/2007 4:57 AM  

Dang Joy - right from the get go this one grabs you and grags you in: "The womb of my mouth is gravid with doom.
The loom of my fate does shuttle sans boon."
I'm seeing a startling common thread this week in many of the poems! Collective subconscious at work?

Anonymous,  8/13/2007 5:55 AM  

A great start. I like the underlying reflective tone of the poem.

Amy Ruttan 8/13/2007 6:38 AM  

It's wonderful it makes me think of those epics of yore!

Susan Helene Gottfried 8/13/2007 8:19 AM  

I don't know that it makes me snort, but it definitely puts me in a funk. This is heavy stuff, and your word choice really reinforces it. Nicely done!

Robin L. Rotham 8/13/2007 9:48 AM  

Like Rhian, I was going to point out a definite trend in this week's offerings. I love how, even in the throes of bitterness, you anticipate joy and renewal. Wonderful!

R.G. ALEXANDER 8/13/2007 10:14 AM  

Its very true. There is a common theme-well except mine lol
This is very cool Joy! :)

Lisa Andel 8/13/2007 10:20 AM  

Bummer, with a side of hope.

Red Garnier 8/13/2007 11:35 AM  

What a powerful poem, Joy. =) Happy Monday!! If you have a min say hi on Mondays at Passions Muses, my day to post is Monday! =)

Jill 8/13/2007 2:52 PM  

The power of light, you did descrive well!!

Ann 8/13/2007 3:48 PM  

Very cool poem, Joy. And there does seem to be a theme going on this week.

Anne D 8/13/2007 3:50 PM  

Very Shakespearean!

Julia Phillips Smith 8/13/2007 6:56 PM  

"Can life breathe for long beneath such sad ruin?
Will my heart soon succumb to the lure of the tomb?"
Don't touch these lines - I love them as is!

Sparky Duck 8/13/2007 9:07 PM  

so i guess you were biting your tongue?

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