Showing posts with label Monday Poetry Train. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Monday Poetry Train. Show all posts

Monday, October 26, 2009

The Day After the Day After

teh read-a-thon b over 2 daiz but ebrting still b topsee turvee
moar funny pictures



The Day After the Day After - Ode to a Read-a-Thon

Sleep sneak attacks at the oddest moments
The world tilts you out of your seat
The ground looses its grip on your feet
Then clad in not but the sky's adornments
You slide into dream as long regiments
Of text glide endlessly past your eyes
On the flapping wings of dragon flies.

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Monday, January 05, 2009

Monday Poetry Train #67

The Kite Runner
by Khaled Hosseini

This is not a review exactly. I just finished this story not an hour ago and even if it weren't too soon to write a coherent review, I'd have to pry one eyelid open while typing one-handed. Let's just say it is so good I gave up my night computer session in order to finish it. Now I must sleep or be useless to my sister and mother tomorrow.

The reason I am featuring it on Poetry Train is that the story is like a poem in its use of image and metaphor and the nesting of symbols inside symbols. The themes of friendship, betrayal, redemption and courage could so easily become cliche in inept hands but Hosseni is deft with language and plot, with character and setting, weaving a glowing tapestry that unrolls like a prayer rug across continents, across time, across the spaces between hearts and across the space within a single heart.

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Monday, November 24, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #66

I don't have it in me to do poetry right now, having just received the news that my 77 year old mother has fallen and broken her hip and will be having surgery around noon today.

So I'm going to do a little photo essay with some of the pics of my Mom I have on my hard drive. I don't seem to have any more recent than August of 2005 from the last family reunion 7 weeks before my Dad died. I'll post the reunion pics below since I've not posted most of them before but for the other pics I'm just going to include the links to the two photo essays I did featuring Mom this past year.

Click here for the photo essay with poem that I did for Mother's Day.

Click here for the photo essay of Mom's life which I did for her birthday last January.

Please send blessings to the surgeon's hands and mind that they be steady and sure.


This is my Mom and Dad on their wedding day, August 7, 1955. It was a double wedding with her twin sister but I don't have a picture including both couples.

Below are the two couples about a week before their 50th anniversary. This was the last one for both couples as my Dad died September 24th and my Aunt (in the polka dot blouse) the week after Thanksgiving. Both after several years battling cancer.


The twins Maurine and Margaret
My parents on a different day of that same reunion. We spent a three-day weekend in a vacation house near Bend Oregon.

Mom and Dad on the road towards Bend that week.

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OK now that is beginning to look and feel like a memorial and I don't want to leave it with a morbid tone. So I'm going to tell the story of how Mom fell. She (77 mind you) was showing off to her big sister Catherine how she exercises with her balance ball. I'm not clear what move she was demonstrating but it involved a chair and since this was at Catherine's house in Rocklin California, it wasn't the chair Mom was used to using and something went wrong. Catherine says she fell hard and then couldn't get up.

Now I guess to those who don't know my Mom that doesn't sound amusing but my sister could not erase the amusement in her tone as she told the story to me on the phone. I hope we are still able to feel the amusement a few days from now.

My sister reminded me that Mom is a trooper and told how she had learned of Mom's fall of 2001 when she tripped on some stairs exiting a building and broke her knee. She had called Carri from the hospital and broke the news with a perky "Guess what?" Like a kid about to announce her acceptance on the cheerleader squad.

I could not help but remember when she allowed herself to be coaxed onto a the neighbor boy's skateboard when I was about nine and then fell and broke her elbow. She had to wear a sling and was not allowed to lift my baby sister--then about 9 or 10 months--I learned to fold diapers and change them that spring, among other things to do with laundry and meal prep and housework.

The point being: my Mom loves to tell these stories ever after. Not as from the woe-is-me standpoint but from the 'let me tell you about my wonderful adventure'. Here's hoping she is telling this story in her perky, bright-eyed wonder-filled voice this time next year.

They were supposed to pick me up on their way back through the Rogue Valey on next Monday and I was planning to spend a couple weeks with them and continue work on scanning the family photos into my computer in preparation for creating a digital ablbum for the entire extended family. I started this project last December and that is where most of the pictures in the photo essays I linked to above came from. The reunion pics on this page came from my sister-friend Jamie's cell phone.

Assuming all goes well, it is still unlikely Mom will be able to travel by car inside of two weeks so I probably won't be going up there to visit until after Christmas now. Since Ed wants me here for Christmas. Which is only fair since his family celebrates Xmas and mine does not.

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Monday, November 10, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #65



The Scope of Hope

by Joy Renee

Hope: the path
Forward my feet trod
In joy shod.

It's 8:05 PM PST
November 4, 2008
and I'm crying as if my heart is breaking.
But the feeling is the opposite of grief.
It is joy. It is relief.
It is like a mending of the shattering--
the gathering and fusing of the parts,
of the many scattered shards
of my heart.

This freight of dreams we must
remember--for posterity's sake--
long time coming, swift appears to exclaiming
cheers, but the feeling is ephemeral, brief.
It is joy. It is relief.
It's a commending to our hands, for sheltering
against extinguishing, this precious spark
now shared among scattered hearts,
this our hope.

Inspired hearts
Conjoined in hope
Effect change.

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I reworked and expanded the piece I began in the minutes after the election results were announced last week. In order to balance out the opening haiku, I added to the ending the haiku that I wrote months ago and have had in my sidebar for awhile now.

While I was looking for images to post with this, I ran across the following video of Will I Am which expresses exactly the same thing I was trying to above--that the exultation of the moment, wonderful as it feels, is only the beginning. We must continue to invest the same energy, cooperation, imagination and hope that was put into the campaign into the work that is before us for we are the change we have been waiting for.





Hop on the train.

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Monday, November 03, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #64



I've talked about Lawson Fusao Inada here a number of times. He has been Oregon's Poet Laureate and an America Book Award winner but that isn't my main motive for continuing to bring him up. He was my creative writing professor in the late eighties when I attended Southern Oregon College in Ashland Oregon. (Southern Oregon University today.) I am bringing it up again today because I've got a DVD of him reading his poems and talking about his childhood in the American internment camps checked out of the library. Not the one above but What It Means To Be Free.

Lawson Inada was the one who woke me up to the power and potential of my own unique viewpoint and pointed toward the way to develop my own voice. We studied and practiced both poetry and fiction in his class. Before doing the poetry section with him I had never considered poetry to be part of my path as a writer. I wrote for his class the first poem that I continued to like as time passed. I see Soul Mirror as one of the first true things I made out of my own heart and knowledge. It still speaks to me in startling ways to this day.

I took his contemporary literature class as well which introduced me to the power voices and stories of women and non-WASP writers. These stories opened the world up to me and probably helped prepare me in ways I can only guess at when the moment of my break with my childhood religion came in the early 90s. I cannot overstate the influence this amazing man has had on my development as an artist and a thinker in my own right. I first learned from him two of the techniques for tapping into inspiration (aka the right side of the brain or non-linear thought) which I continue to use: listening to music and gazing at art. Once we had learned how that felt, he taught us how to gaze at the world around us and see it fresh.

He gave me personally the assignment to describe something I saw on my daily forty-five minute bus ride to school every day. I described a woman I saw on the bus who appeared to be talking to herself or possibly performing on a stage only she was aware of--a woman with red hair down to her waist and a face that looked like a shelled walnut. That woman walked onto the stage of my first Faye story as Estelle Star in 'Of Cats and Claws and Curiosities.' Which story I also began as an exercise for his class. The story that grew to become my Fruits of the Spirit story world with a cast of dozens.

Because I'm busy with the kickoff of NaNoWriMo and at least partially because we lost power last night for five hours between 10:15 PM and 3:30AM, pretty much the entirety of my usual work session, I didn't get a new poem written for today so I'll just leave the link to my Poem Portal in which I try to keep links to all my poems posted in Joystory. It needs to be updated some. More recent poems missing from the portal can be found through the Poems by Joy Renee Lable below this post.

Oh, and I can point to the poem at the top of my sidebar under Obama's picture. That's one of my Haiku. And with that, I will take the opportunity to encourage all my American reader's to VOTE tomorrow. Whoever you favor, VOTE. It is the most solemn duty of every American. VOTE.

Since Rhian has been too busy to keep Monday Poetry Train running lately, Gautami Tripathy has taken on that task until Rhian can return. Find more passengers here.

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Monday, September 15, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #63



Lyrics to Subterranean Homesick Blues

In honor of the hours and hours I spent with Bob Dylan music and lyrics during and after watching I'm Not There, I was going to write a piece that could be sung to the same beat as Subterranean Homesick Blues. But my head is too full of Dylan's words right now and I want my piece to be wholly mine in content if not form. So I'm just going to post the vid and link to the lyrics. I hope I have something by next week.

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Monday, September 08, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #62


Haiku
by Joy Renee

Inspired hearts
Conjoined in hope
Effect change.

<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>

I posted this once before during the primary but not on Poetry Train.

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Monday, September 01, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #61


The Measure of an Ego
by Joy Renne

Gustav was a downright gusty fellow,
arriving on the coat tails of August,
carrying tornados in his pockets,
turning his fickle gaze on the waters,
his eye churning wave and wind into tears
and sending telegrams of fear ashore.
He came storming through our dreams strewing
debris about with busy abandon.
Birds and fish congregate in each others
parish learning the nature of no-name
--the new being nameless is thus blameless.
Rainbows noose the sky and news pelts the face
of land and sea with stinging seeds, sowing
wet and windy demands for attention.
Soon distracted he will burst out a door
his own flailing fists knocked through tomorrow
trudging with heavy thighs across time
leaving behind many sighs and sorrows.

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Monday, August 25, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #60



Haiku
by Joy Renee

Awaken!
To a glorious day.
Jump for joy.

And while you're at it sing and dance. Here's 2 Unlimited to show you how:



Sometimes, even when you don't feel like it, you just gotta do it. And then you just might find the feeling. It's magic that way.

This one's for you sis.

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Monday, August 18, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #59



Haiku
by Joy Renee

Glide over
Thin frozen skin of
Hidden depths.

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Monday, August 11, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #58


An Haiku
by Joy Renee

Reading fast--
Frantic scrolling through
Fated text.

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So this is what I've been doing with all my spare time and not so spare time for over a week--since a week ago last Thursday when Joely Sue Burkhart announced that she would, in a matter of days, be moving her blog to a new host and that her current host would not allow her to export her WP blog so she was going to let the archive die--reading the archives from the first post forward one by one.

I've been reading Joely's blog for around a year now and been in awe of her ability to juggle a full time programming job, three small children, a husband, a household, pets, and still find a way to make her dream to publish her stories come true. I discovered her through Friday Snippets last summer not long after she had made her first novella length sale to Drollerie Press. I soon picked up that she had been chronicling her writer's journey since early in 2004 and I kept meaning to delve into her archives to follow at least some of it.

Then there was the added attraction of the stories of her three daughters scattered among the posts about writing, revising, researching and submitting to contests and agents and a variety of technology related snafus. Her storytelling talents were not reserved for her fiction endeavors. Her stories of the ups and downs of running a household have a charm that reminds me of Erma Bombeck. I had already grown to love those three girls through the last year's worth of occasional posts featuring them. But when I was finally goaded into delving into the archives by the news they were about to disappear, I was astounded to discover that all three had still be pre-school, the youngest two both in diapers, when she dedicated herself to the writer's path in 2003.

More than anything, this is what I hoped to learn from her: how she managed to make it happen. I have a better idea about that now that I've read three full years of her posts. The archives started in April of 2004 and I am now in April 2007. I never expected to make it this far as the site was slated to be switched over last week sometime and ever since Monday evening a week ago I've been anxious every time I clicked on the next link that the page wouldn't be there and I'd get an error page instead. If she's been watching her stats, she probably thinks she has a stalker.

This tendency of mine to let a distraction take me into an obsession is one of the reasons I haven't made it happen for myself. I'm fairly certain Joely would not have spent twelve days reading 1200+ pages of a single blog! Including comments--where much of the story resides in the evidence that support from friends and fellow writers who cheer and chide and chomp at the bit for the next snippet from one of her stories may be one of the essential elements for a writer's success. I keep telling myself that I should take a lesson from her dedication and self-control and close the browser now and open my own story files. But I keep clicking that next link...

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Monday, August 04, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #57


Won't you see?
It's right there! In the
Midst of things.

What? You won't
acknowledge? Then your
fate is sealed.

For you face
your fear first, before
You can cope.

To make room
for things hoped for, chase
away doom.

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I've done something I rarely do by posting a picture I can't give proper attribute for. But it was the focus of this poem consisting of four haikus. I keep running into this image online so I'm hoping that means it is fair game. If anyone knows better or has cause to object, let me know.

The subject of the poem is also referring to an issue I've been having with my fiction writing. A great big Duh! But that's a whole 'nother post! :)

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Monday, July 28, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #56



Still

by Joy Renee

Still, after all this time,
our stories intertwine.
Tho the fibers may be frayed
by strains of distance and years,
never have we each other's
hearts betrayed,
nor scorned the other's fears.

Still, after all these years,
after a million tears
were shed for joy and sorrow,
there has never been a sign
trust had been misplaced. Our
soul's morrow
left steeping in the brine.

Still, after all we've shared
and all the secrets bared,
we could never dare behold
shadows stalking at our keels--
putrid slough off ancient wounds.
We withhold
awareness of such weals.

Still, after all we've been
through, having taken friend-
ship for granted, we embark
upon a desperate voyage
toward a luminous fate
to demark
the depth of our courage.

Still, after all, we're left--
our hearts gashed, seared, bereft--
with spirits aloft, soaring
'or the abyss of despair
refusing to abandon
or sink
our lives beneath such care.

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I posted the first three verses of this poem last week, saying I felt it was incomplete. I've added two more and now feel it comes around to closure.

This was inspired by and reflects some of the story and much of the theme of Still Summer by Jacquelyn Mitchard

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Sunday, July 20, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #55



Still

by Joy Renee

Still, after all this time,
our stories intertwine.
Tho the fibers may be frayed
by strains of distance and years,
never have we each other's
hearts betrayed,
nor scorned the other's fears.

Still, after all these years,
after a million tears
were shed for joy and sorrow,
there has never been a sign
trust had been misplaced. Our
soul's morrow
left steeping in the brine.

Still, after all we've shared
and all the secrets bared,
we could never dare behold
shadows stalking at our keels--
putrid slough off ancient wounds.
We withhold
awareness of such weals

to our doom.

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I'm fairly sure this is incomplete. It feels unfinished to me, like a story without resolution.

This was inspired by the novel I just finished. The one I mentioned in Friday's post, Head's Up. The one I'm going to be hosting a giveaway for this week. I hope by mid Tuesday latest. Watch for it. I'm so excited. It's my first book giveaway.

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Sunday, July 13, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #54


Overflowing Light
by Joy Renee

There is a place within my mind
where every flicker of my thought
casts wavery images on walls
of white
as I
down memory's long halls traverse
reciting lines of ancient verse.

There came a time when lingering long
and wandering far into the maze
that light flared bright and overflowed.
I saw
In awe
as memories mixed with lore of old
and bright reflections of my dreams

were etched with lightning dipped in inks
whose bottomless wells fill with hues
drained from the rainbow's jeweled veins.
My self
must melt
or be consumed by bright untold
stories wove of flame; yet untamed.

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Well, I said in yesterday's post that I just might have to write some posts designed to feature pictures off this site. As before the picture is linked to it's page on fromoldbooks.org.

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Sunday, July 06, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #53


Tick. Tock. Tick.
Time swirls down the drain.
Tock. Tick. Tock.

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Monday, June 30, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #52


Smoke
by Joy Renee

Tearing eyes
Blink spasmodically.
Fire kindles in the throat.
Breath labors.
A haze blankets thought.
Will lays low,
Awaiting the cleansing
Breeze.

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I pity and pray for the firefighters battling up close the fires in California whose smoke is reaching us here in the Rogue Valley of Southern Oregon. The misery I'm feeling must be multiplied many times over for them and they haven't the luxury of laying low to wait it out.

I found the picture at art.com and it doesn't say where or when it was taken. But it gives a fair idea of what our area must look like from above right now.

My prayers are with the families whose homes are in the path of those fires. As well as with all the animals wild and domestic.

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Sunday, June 22, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #51



A Bear Ate
by Joy Renee

A bear ate a
vibrator
scavenging a garbage bin
and went galumphing
through the suburbs,
and berating
the moon
met up with
a beret attired
vibrato
scarfing a garbanzo bean
and lentil soup singing
to the burps and
beer attending
goon.

A bear ate a
vibrato,
a beer attired
goon
and slurped garbanzo bean
and lentil soup, slinging
a beret at
the moon.

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I've no idea where this came from. Except that I couldn't keep my eyes open last night as I started to work on this post and I closed them and lay down without even closing the laptop lid, turning off the lamp or the TV tuned to XM 7 playing 70s hits. I remember thinking it was no use berating myself and besides I'd just write garbage if I tried to think with such a fatigue vibrated brain.

I woke at 4AM from a dream in which someone, laughing hysterically was saying "A bear ate a vibrator...."

OK, so sleeping on it didn't help much.

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Monday, June 16, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #50




Taking Daddy's Hand
by Joy Renee

When fear pushed
its ugly face into
my dreams
and rampaged through
imagination's hall,
bouncing its
shattering screams
off cracked mirrors,
I reached for Daddy's
hand and saw
fear's visiage disolved
like morning mist
at noon
then scattered on the
brisk breeze of his
stern voice.

<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>

Jump on the train

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Sunday, June 08, 2008

Monday Poetry Train #49


Tree of Peace
by Josephine Wall
poster for sale at art.com


Paired Haiku: Root and Branch (On Conflict Resolution)
by Joy Renee

On Conflict

Roots go deep--
Tangled stories in
History's soil.

On Resolution

Branching out--
Old stories weaved with
Common dreams.

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