tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post6305331605254066463..comments2023-10-21T18:11:04.414-07:00Comments on Joystory: Monday Poetry Train #56Joy Reneehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04976987581528470589noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-32316961063615445152008-08-02T12:31:00.000-07:002008-08-02T12:31:00.000-07:00Wow, is all I have to say.Wow, is all I have to say.Jamiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09240917253400707151noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-73154852659962120182008-07-29T07:02:00.000-07:002008-07-29T07:02:00.000-07:00Thanks for posting both versions. It's fascinating...Thanks for posting both versions. It's fascinating to watch a poem evolve.Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-67865413250830895292008-07-28T19:50:00.000-07:002008-07-28T19:50:00.000-07:00I compared this poem to last weeks and I do not th...I compared this poem to last weeks and I do not think it is incompleat and I see how you did befor so great job going and fixing something you didn't feel was right.Elizabeth Bauterflyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02954169560670583364noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-16200151875242457912008-07-28T09:29:00.000-07:002008-07-28T09:29:00.000-07:00It does feel complete. One good poem!deeply in lov...It does feel complete. One good poem!<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/07/deeply-in-love-with-draculas-daughter.html" REL="nofollow">deeply in love with dracula's daughter</A>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-2490038984480231842008-07-28T07:31:00.000-07:002008-07-28T07:31:00.000-07:00"putrid slough off ancient wounds.We withholdaware..."putrid slough off ancient wounds.<BR/>We withhold<BR/>awareness of such weals." <BR/><BR/>Easier said than done. This is a fantastic poem. I love it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com