tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post4044879826494390259..comments2023-10-21T18:11:04.414-07:00Comments on Joystory: Friday Snippets 28Joy Reneehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04976987581528470589noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-12941393170655805602008-02-08T12:40:00.000-08:002008-02-08T12:40:00.000-08:00leaving them un-tethered in a suddenly weightless ...<I>leaving them un-tethered in a suddenly weightless world</I><BR/><BR/>Lovely.<BR/><BR/>I'm not quite sure about the laugh at the end, but I guess I might know by next episode. (Oh! *realises he's late and there's two episodes... reads on* Oh yeah, now it makes sense!)IanThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05458989880437028922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-86014466470662271612008-02-02T16:55:00.000-08:002008-02-02T16:55:00.000-08:00Yeah, I agree, great description of emotion and "t...Yeah, I agree, great description of emotion and "the black tears." You just know that's how a kid sees mascara run.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-42674463287363620732008-02-01T17:07:00.000-08:002008-02-01T17:07:00.000-08:00Again, so much emotion, and "black tears" -- that ...Again, so much emotion, and "black tears" -- that was really nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-73289762520850488872008-02-01T12:36:00.000-08:002008-02-01T12:36:00.000-08:00I love the way you pull these personal moments of ...I love the way you pull these personal moments of tragedy and family dynamics. You build such great tension and interest. I can't wait to read what happens next.<BR/><BR/>"Auntie Carla cried black tears all over Uncle Ron’s shirt"<BR/><BR/>Great visual!Renee M. Solberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12618708310755476695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-43231564875294661862008-02-01T11:27:00.000-08:002008-02-01T11:27:00.000-08:00Hi, Joy Renee. Nice read. Thanks for posting.What ...Hi, Joy Renee. Nice read. Thanks for posting.<BR/><BR/>What does "brain dead" mean?<BR/><BR/>-TimKAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com