tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post6251622703005090029..comments2023-10-21T18:11:04.414-07:00Comments on Joystory: Friday Snippets #7Joy Reneehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04976987581528470589noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-70605886577388928692007-08-24T22:11:00.000-07:002007-08-24T22:11:00.000-07:00Oh, nice! The parallel between the child Briana pl...Oh, nice! The parallel between the child Briana placing rag doll on the gate, and the adult Briana doing the same with a baby--that's good characterization.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-636929524369804812007-08-24T12:12:00.000-07:002007-08-24T12:12:00.000-07:00I love the parallel to the ragdoll on the fence. ...I love the parallel to the ragdoll on the fence. For some reason that's a wonderfully powerful image. Great character developments in this snippet to - I am definitely curious about Julia...<BR/><BR/>And I agree with Iant. If it's not a word, it should be. :DBrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10337090157655667695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-7765044197239915472007-08-24T09:08:00.000-07:002007-08-24T09:08:00.000-07:00So this takes place years after the last one? I'm ...So this takes place years after the last one? I'm a bit confused that the fly buzzing around me doesn't help, lol.<BR/><BR/>Looks like the ladies love to take creatures in, stray cats, abandoned babies - wonder what next. :)<BR/><BR/>Btw, you got a few tense jumps there.Gabriele Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17205770868139083575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-77690722328246984692007-08-24T06:16:00.000-07:002007-08-24T06:16:00.000-07:00I'm definitely intrigued...I'm definitely intrigued...Susan Bischoffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811600322718603388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-43853753729613173372007-08-24T05:42:00.000-07:002007-08-24T05:42:00.000-07:00I love that small, tiny hint in Julia's voice.I love that small, tiny hint in Julia's voice.Joely Sue Burkharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17895058332587825648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-87634912676005421722007-08-24T02:45:00.000-07:002007-08-24T02:45:00.000-07:00I don't know if 'skreel' is a word, but if it isn'...I don't know if 'skreel' is a word, but if it isn't, it ought to be - a wonderful noise. :-)IanThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05458989880437028922noreply@blogger.com