tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post4401503300112830447..comments2023-10-21T18:11:04.414-07:00Comments on Joystory: Friday Snipets 15Joy Reneehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04976987581528470589noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-49576146372201516972007-10-20T20:19:00.000-07:002007-10-20T20:19:00.000-07:00Wonderful story. Nice ending too, although I have ...Wonderful story. Nice ending too, although I have to agree with Ian, what about Brandon and the revelations?Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17968479919482739686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-81327889202797485802007-10-20T17:35:00.000-07:002007-10-20T17:35:00.000-07:00Oh, what a wonderful ending. So many heartfelt li...Oh, what a wonderful ending. So many heartfelt lines about Mamas, possibilities, hope, faith... Wonderful story!Joely Sue Burkharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17895058332587825648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-20473427472209178882007-10-20T02:36:00.000-07:002007-10-20T02:36:00.000-07:00I agree with Cheryl - great characters and manneri...I agree with Cheryl - great characters and mannerisms of speech.<BR/><BR/>A couple of minor things:<BR/>- This passage mixes past and present tense quite a bit, changing from paragraph to paragraph. Is that intentional?<BR/>- If this is the end, what happened to Brandon and that revelation?IanThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05458989880437028922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8976770.post-79299300679998188482007-10-19T17:44:00.000-07:002007-10-19T17:44:00.000-07:00JoyRenee, I liked this story. It has some grand c...JoyRenee, I liked this story. It has some grand characters!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com